Allen & Bacon Ch. 11 Reading

The chapter brought up an interesting point about revising "locally" and "globally," these are two differing types of revision. When you revise so that only the one or two sentences you are working are changed, you are revising "locally." When you revise so that the audience changes, ideas change, or structure changes this is refereed to as revising "globally." The book suggests that both types be used to revise successfully.